Comments on: The Notebook–4 http://onepennyprofiles.wordpress.com/2008/07/09/the-notebook-part-iv/ One Penny Fictions: Read'em and Weep Thu, 16 Jul 2009 13:30:18 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: One Penny Profiles http://onepennyprofiles.wordpress.com/2008/07/09/the-notebook-part-iv/#comment-63 One Penny Profiles Sun, 20 Jul 2008 22:25:12 +0000 http://onepennyprofiles.wordpress.com/?p=76#comment-63 C-- Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you liked this story, particularly the end 'cause I wasn't too sure if it worked. One Penny C–
Thanks for the feedback. I’m glad you liked this story, particularly the end ’cause I wasn’t too sure if it worked.

One Penny

]]> By: c http://onepennyprofiles.wordpress.com/2008/07/09/the-notebook-part-iv/#comment-60 c Sun, 20 Jul 2008 19:03:34 +0000 http://onepennyprofiles.wordpress.com/?p=76#comment-60 This is excellent writing. i like how the reader comes in the middle of it. The close is skillful, my mind sketching so many possibilities. This is excellent writing. i like how the reader comes in the middle of it.
The close is skillful, my mind sketching so many possibilities.

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